/lit/ - Literature

Anonymous Tue Dec 1 00:24:20 2015 No.7409122 [View]
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>>7407393
The last sentence in the monologue seems kinda forced and strange. The rest is good.

>>7407457
It's not terrible. There are some interesting things there, but it feels very forced and, like the other anon said, boring.

>>7407795
I liked this a lot. There was a good, intriguing plot for the first 2/3 of it. The dialogue at the end feels kinda weird. There were also some spelling errors, so I'd recommend reading through it again and checking that. Otherwise fun to read.

>>7408240
Jesus man. What the hell are you trying to do? Write the worst Lutheran hymn you could?
http://pastebin.com/YEZjugxT

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