/lit/ - Literature

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My main criticism is that there's no real overarching idea here beyond love taking place in a world removed from the ordinary one. None of the images develop or interact; they don't add up to a more complex whole. So it just feels like a chain of vague, kind of familiar, kind of meaningless sentiments.

But I had to google a few lines to make sure it wasn't an actual 19th-century production, so I'll give you that.