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>> No.21687105 [View]
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Reposting this because it got no crits in the previous thread, which broke my little heart.

Also available as a pastebin: https://pastebin.com/78nbyi2f

>> No.21676660 [View]
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I was pretty pleased with this until my final readthrough. Whatever. It's done.

One of my goals was to keep up a sentence-to-sentence level momentum while also have a rhythm between high-tension and low-tension moments. Not sure if I pulled it off.

Available both as a pastebin and as a massive jpeg, for those freaks among you who'd prefer the latter.

https://pastebin.com/78nbyi2f

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