/lit/ - Literature

>Fantasy book
>Characters say "Oh my Gods!" instead of "Oh my God."

>>22347790
>He did a thing and then thing happened. He felt etc etc
So how do you improve on prose? I'm starting to notice most of my sentences begin with "he", "she", or "character name". Do I just read more books and pay attention to the way that author structures sentences?

>>18015671
>Communists are murderous psychopaths.
Not like you, of course. I'm sure you are so tolerant and empathe-
>Communists are rats. The only thing you can do with them is kill them as if they were a pest.
Oh

>>11862962
I don't like how 4chan turned me into a bisexual. I used to laugh at people who wanted to fuck traps and now i am one of those people. It disturbs me greatly, as i can never live out this desire due to me feeling immense shame for jerking off to it already.

I realize that I was never bullied in high school because I was insane back then. My friend told me of a time when some black kid was giving me shit and i threatened to put a gun to his head and make a tunnel through his temple.
My anger issues have since been rectified but being a little terrorist back then is something i must have chose to forget.
>>11848519
Why worry is you'll never know until it happens? It's not like anyone will give you a real answer about the afterlife

I don't know if your shit posting or are being sincere (hopefully the former) but if you want you should check out the /biz/ reading guide then.

>>10189867
>tfw no mommy gf who reads out short stories to help me fall asleep