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Analyzing this completely from what the poem is:
First line is establishment. Fairly obvious, has to be there. Second is an action, which is fundamental to telling any story. It's also an action we don't expect (probably). The third can be taken two ways ("yes, the tiger is out" and "the tiger is out - yes!"), so the second yes makes it crystal clear that it's the second interpretation, while adding emotion in a simple and easy to see form. The last line sums up the whole poem and generates a whole new story in our heads about what happens next. As for the meter, structure, etc. I really have no idea, but all the line breaks make sense. Each line is a complete sentence - you could write the poem in a sentence and put punctuation between the lines and it would work, for a lot of different combinations. That makes it feel clean and easy to read, basically no matter how you read it.

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