/lit/ - Literature

>>13474232
don't invoke people better than you. the last thing you want to do as a writer is suggest people for your readers to check out as a palate-cleanser.
also what the fuck does kafka have to do with dante

>>13469012
i think it's human nature to shorten goodbyes. hence, "peace" instead of "goodbye" and "tschüss" instead of "auf wiedersehen." good use of color, tho. my favorite bit by far is the "circle, circle, circle" part. reduplication is sadly underused.

>>13468361
please tell me where you can get brandy for $6. that would help me out a lot. all i've got to work with is $12 bourbon.
um. i'm personally biased because i like shit to be clean, but comparing a clean apartment to rape is a little iffy. also, the singular is "simulacrum," and i'm not impressed by the fact that you've skimmed baudrillard. you go on too long for the subject matter, too.

>>13467970
you seem very in tune with your own mind. the end is a little confusing, but the part with the pulse is beautiful. keep it up.