/lit/ - Literature

>dat hat

Wrote this at work. Wanted to know what /lit/ thinks. Is it a grabbing start to a supernatural detective story? I've never really felt that I've done a good, engaging beginning before.

>I stood over the body with my gun all but smoking as I heard the commotion outside the room. I barely had time to react as the police kicked in the door, my friend and former partner right at the front. The shock on his face was evident even though he tried to remain professional.
>"Drop the gun and get on the floor," he shouted, a revolver like mine in his hand. They jam less. That's why I told him I liked using them. It was trained on my heart, or maybe my head. It was hard to judge with the blood pounding in my ears, making everything shake. "Drop it now, Emmerich!"

>>872686
not for the dresden files

>>691513
Read them from the start. The whole series is great, but the first 2 books aren't as badass as the rest.

>>557834
This murderer SHOULD feel bad.