/lit/ - Literature

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I find many first drafts or unpolished pieces are often rife with commas. This likely occurs because thoughts for each individual portion of the sentence come to the author one by one, which are strung together and the natural impulse is to separate them with commas.
On further edits, as the flow and rhythm of the paragraphs and sentences begins to stand out, they can be removed or replaced as needed.

Want to start in this topic, don't want to summon a succubus or learn about astrology just decent literature about Lucifer, rituals, spiritism etc