/lit/ - Literature

First time over here.
Tell me what do you think.
English is not my first language so there may be some flaws into it.

"Quiet and stillness in the blackest of nigths
rides a shiver thundering down my spine
like a marching of regretting memories
one reflection follows another in line.

Silent dawn of new born lights
shall you bathe me in crimson shine
let my soul rejoice in my past glories
the path I've chosen remains as mine.

Hear my plea oh ghosts of shattered times
may my scars find healing in tomorrow's way
lend rest to the wanderer's troubled self
must my sight remains in what's ahead.

Mistakes, they break, what not, stain
wounds will close yet marks stay
beware of losing the grasp of yourself
the past is a guide that never misleads."