/lit/ - Literature

I'd appreciate any comments on the next 500 words. I normally write in a much more maximalist and stylized manner, so all this feedback has been very helpful.

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hm the mailbox is actually kind of central to my story--I have it written in my margins to make later scenes resemble certain parts of it

but I /kind/ of dislike how I wrote about the mailbox--I think I will try describing it more technically, going into dimensions, build, etc. etc. thanks for the feedback, going to try a new approach and see