/lit/ - Literature

>>9271815
maybe paradise lost and the fall of hyperion? chretien de troyes? idk but i don't want this thread to die

>>9260644
>doesn't flow good
don't make me critique your critique
>The sky blended into the ground. He felt like a force of nature, as if anything in his path wouldn't matter. He would just run through it; a brick wall was no problem at all.
>In front of him, the man in the grey jacket was hit by a car. The window cracked. His body came to a sudden stop, heel grinding against the ground with all the force of his inertia. He leapt back up, his grey jacket now torn. He was unsure if he was disappointed, disappointed that the chase could have ended there, or relieved that he would continue to have this primal feeling in him, possessing his limbs, moving them without thought. They began again.
>Their shadows flowed and stretched against the tall, bleached walls of the alley. The man in the jacket had begun to slow down, seeming to suddenly realize how hurt he was. His leg began to act up as if it, too, realized that it was broken. He tried to balance himself, jerking back and forth. He fell into a puddle. Laying in the waste of the city, he twisted and contorted like a worm, his torn jacket absorbing the filth around him. He screamed. Words of excuse. They all had the same meaning. "Someone else, please, God! Not me!"
>The other man gently raised his hand to the one lying in the water, an ocean, lying like a small, hurt child. In the other man's grip, a revolver. He imagined himself as "the killer." Not himself, anymore. Something eternal. A mythic figure. Something that exists outside of man. But it was a man's finger that pulled the trigger.
uwu

>>9261320
write what you know

>>9262217
yo you ever been to huntsville, alabama

>>9263838
i seriously cannot believe you are getting shit for saying that "helloooooo" is not publishable

it's not, guys. it's retarded. if you want to express how someone is saying something, you need to use your own language to express it, not write a bunch of o's or use allcaps or ~~ or whatever.