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>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 24 00:39:11 2017 No.10440876 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10439761 at least my work has cool words in it

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 22 12:51:12 2017 No.10301592 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10301538 me

Anonymous Thu Aug 24 14:46:08 2017 No.9934181 [View]
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>>9934100
>>9934100
Mine is a *little* less concrete as far as the spaces are concerned, but most of my structural choices fulfill (or try to) a grammatical role as well, which may have be pretty intuitive for the small spaces.

sometimes (>>9923746)
the structure is just an attempt at clearly organizing things in a way to ease the reading, but sometimes (pic-related) I use it to deliberately bewilder (this is the closest to the non-linearity I'm interested in)

Anonymous Sun Jun 18 19:16:35 2017 No.9653006 [View]
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>Forever were the days lost in the music.

change 'the music' to just music to fix the rhythm in the first stanza

this quasi-iambic meter with help a lot in setting to music

if you go with the second, aloud this may not matter, but on paper, the first stanza feels amatuerish with its enjambments. The later mid-word enjambments work out really well, btw.

Its about time I crack this thing back open
will critique any poem back in detail

1/2

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 14 20:23:38 2017 No.9638186 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9638181 here

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 14 01:22:57 2017 No.9634921 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9634866 stop calling me trite!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jun 12 19:14:31 2017 No.9629903 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] call me a failure. i dare you.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jun 5 15:28:53 2017 No.9600094 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9600009 me

>>	Anonymous Tue May 9 19:21:31 2017 No.9486425 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9486380 work on the font work

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 25 16:26:56 2017 No.9427476 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9427290 Aesthetic (sub-egoistic)

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 24 20:19:26 2017 No.9424049 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9424030 a copy cat

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 22 23:49:51 2017 No.9415838 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9414503 i'm a budding author harass me

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 21 01:48:59 2017 No.9408299 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] self-promotion general?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 3 19:17:04 2017 No.9331712 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] when you truly understand me 1/2

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 27 15:44:25 2017 No.9300961 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ?

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 23 13:08:28 2017 No.9281950 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9281838 i am special

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 15:08:13 2017 No.9262651 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9262612 a stepping stone

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 14 15:58:54 2017 No.9238357 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] it's the only way to talk of the future through symbols of the past

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 10 23:18:38 2017 No.9221300 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9220671 >>9220673 >>9220696 isn't me

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 9 18:55:20 2017 No.9215072 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9213143 pop-quiz which one am I?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 6 21:40:03 2017 No.9200662 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] self promotion general? I'm gonna be studied before i die. 1/2

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 3 16:03:51 2017 No.9184667 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] if you want to write crazy shit work harder at it >like me 1/2

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 27 17:58:22 2017 No.9166456 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9165251 you tell me 1/2

>>	Anonymous Sat Feb 25 23:29:42 2017 No.9158810 [View] File: 151 KB, 1038x1331, wak1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9158795 >it's prose for people too dumb to write prose this is the dumbest shit/bait i've seen in a long time 1/2

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