/lit/ - Literature

>>22547884
That's almost interesting.
In fact, I have a main character that wants to fuck his sister, and the whole plot point is he might have been isekai'd, or maybe he's mentally ill and a savant with brain damage.

Maybe try making character traits actually matter rather than be quirks. My case, it's literally the source of conflict.

>>21912631
a distilled economy of words leading to a clear, yet visceral description of emotion and circumstance. the Emphasis of the all capital YES, the total lack of punctuation leading to a steady flow of words, the courage to damn the ideas of rhyme and consistent structure, or to make it longer than need be.
It is and intellectual modern masterwork.

yes

YES

>>21888874
βρεκεκεκέξ

>>21819006
>>HEY DOL MERRY DOL RING A DONG DILLO
>>RING A DONG HOP ALONG FAL LAL THE WILLOW
>>TOM BOM JOLLY TOM TOM BOMBADILLO
>>HO TOM BOMBADIL TOM BOMBADILLO BY WATER WOOD AND HILL BY THE REED AND WILLOW
>>OLD TOM BOMBADIL IS A MERRY FELLOW BRIGHT BLUE HIS JACKET IS AND HIS BOOTS ARE YELLOW

>>21819006
>>HEY DOL MERRY DOL RING A DONG DILLO
>>RING A DONG HOP ALONG FAL LAL THE WILLOW
>>TOM BOM JOLLY TOM TOM BOMBADILLO
>ok that was a bit odd but necessary for the plot to advance, let's see what the next chapter has in store
>>HO TOM BOMBADIL TOM BOMBADILLO BY WATER WOOD AND HILL BY THE REED AND WILLOW
>ok that's over with finally the story can resume as norm-
>>OLD TOM BOMBADIL IS A MERRY FELLOW BRIGHT BLUE HIS JACKET IS AND HIS BOOTS ARE YELLOW

>>21429558
>apparentll someone trying to keep Shabbat is worse than a murderer who says Jesus saved him through his blood
correct

>I dedicate this book to the manes of Apollonius of Tyana, Christ's contemporary, and to any remaining truthful Illuminati in this fleeting world;
>And in order to underline its profound unreality, its spirituality, its futility, I dedicate it to anarchy and to the war for this world; I dedicate it finally to the Ancestors, to the Heroes in the classical sense and to the spirits of the Great Dead.

accept that it doesn't matter and enjoy the story as you perceive it

Alice’s adventure is prototypically labyrinthine.

>Henceforth

>>20466925
>In this post, I will attempt to show how this OP is /lit/