/lit/ - Literature

>>10446406
very bland
>she was a dyke
made me laugh tho
I liked that closing line. Fabulous Muscles, Xiu Xiu
>>10446506
12/10
>>10446394
at least you're self-aware
>>10446342
the visual poetic equivalent of dry anal. Its very
bland. boring. like a bowl of oatmeal. Also, have you ever even read a poem?
Random Rules - Silver Jews
>>10446277
c-h-o-p-p-y
>>10446230
Ye Olde Noise!
>>10446217
WILL IT BE LIKE BEFORE?
>>10446809
you have an accent that people hate. your tongue hangs heavy. teeth rotting in your jaw. You speak nothing but words to remember their worth.
Stop writing.
>>10446836
How's the Greeks coming, champ?
>>10447027
FUCK. TURN THE POETRY WORLD OVER MAAAAAAN.
>>10447056
>Undoubtedly humble,
While we are left legless
Though not made to stumble.
But truth makes acceptance
An easy occurrence,

OOF

>>10447677
removed rhymes with thing as a scheme and you have something
>>10449059
>>10449063
you the same author?
these are good. I like these. Short. Sweet. to the point.
>>10449705
Ive been trying to write haikus as of late! This is really nice!! I love it. Thank you for sharing, Anon.
>>10450745
im ordering one boom bap beat and chinese
Can I finally be like you? with shit in my tooth?

>>10453128
yellow bile on bathroom floor
i read this poem and spew out more
>>10453475
I can tell you want to transcend but in order to transcend, you must feel at peace with yourself. Stop being so angry. Stop copying off others to make yourself bigger than you are. A presence in a room is not always needed.
>>10453523
This is the greatest robot poem i've ever read!
>>10453614
>the foil of some Russian sweets
Just before a star jumped solely
good lines
>>10453706
Every fucking time.
>>10453736
if edgy is boring, then im crowning you the new king.
>>10455911
eh.