/lit/ - Literature

Are we allowed to ask for feedback on erotic writing? Anyway, here goes...

A large, muscular green hand came to cup the princess's right breast, exposed through the lattice of rope she'd been forced to wear, and tweaked the rosy nipple between thumb and coarse finger. Then, hoisting her atop his knee, with her legs splayed across his hypertrophied thigh and her nude, meaty pussy rubbing against his cold plateleg, the chieftain lifted her chin and spat into her open mouth.

The onlooking soldiers were shocked. How could Princess Honoka, a gifted swordswoman, have fallen so low? How could she let herself be degraded so, and by an orc, that most barbarian race of creature? It went against all reason. And yet they watched powerless (for intervention surely meant her death) as the princess, apparently of her own volition, got onto her knees and faced the orc's filthy member with a look of rapture, sticking her tongue out at an odd angle; one would think she were sitting down to a delicious home-cooked meal, but the pupils of her eyes had morphed to resemble hearts.

Putting her long pink hair back in a ponytail, she offered the soldiers a glimpse at her armpits, which she had apparently neglected to shave during her long captivity - they were overgrown with frizzy black armpit hair - and having done so, began to kiss and lick the orc's oversized member with such whorish delight that a shiver went through the soldiers' spines even as their loins began to stir. Her pendulous, milky breasts jiggled to and fro as she sucked at the green mushroom-like glans, which itself was so big she could not fit more than half of it in her mouth unless she were to somehow dislocate her jaw, and she was shamelessly fingering herself.

At this point, many of the soldiers had thrown down their weapons and were openly masturbating to the sight of their sovereign being violated by the enemy.