/lit/ - Literature

>>16163450
I read Chapter 1. I enjoyed the premise and I hope you continue to flesh it out. I am sad that there is not a full book to read.

Feed back:
1. I assume there will be some later tie-in with Kennedy's assassination, but I had some trouble believing there already was a moon base in 1963 while the actual moon landing didn't happen until 1969. Of course this is sci-fi, not history. There is a faster than light Kinetic Drive, so the reader has a hint that space development happened more rapidly or started earlier than our timeline. A few more over the course of the story would be nice.

2. I was a little confused if Brody's father was an aeromechanic or a normal mechanic. This may be related to (1).

3. I really enjoyed that this is told from the construction worker side of things. This niche seems to be mostly empty. I get https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moonlight_Mile_(manga) vibes from it.

4. Will Brody and Maksim hatefuck or sabotage each other. I'm not sure, but either way works.

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