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>> No.17516867 [View]
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If anyone could offer any feedback on this passage from my short story, I'd appreciate it.

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If anyone has any comments on this passage from my short story, I'd appreciate hearing them.

This is last time I'll ask for help on this short story before I try submitting it somewhere. Appreciate all the anons who helped me with it in the other threads.

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