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>>	Anonymous Thu Feb 11 11:45:45 2021 No.17516867 [View] File: 93 KB, 632x641, Thirteen_11.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] If anyone could offer any feedback on this passage from my short story, I'd appreciate it.

Anonymous Wed Feb 10 18:29:58 2021 No.17510516 [View]
File: 93 KB, 632x641, Thirteen_11.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

If anyone has any comments on this passage from my short story, I'd appreciate hearing them.

This is last time I'll ask for help on this short story before I try submitting it somewhere. Appreciate all the anons who helped me with it in the other threads.

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