/lit/ - Literature

>>21203545
The edit I made, when flipped and with the legs removed, is pretty close to the original in concept (though not in execution). It could be incorporated into the text to give a more polished look, if he’d be open to that. I could replicate the poppies in a similar style. That would improve the piece while keeping the key elements, I think.

Nothing against the author and I respect his intention, but the execution was lacking. The bird drawing sort of looks like a low-effort MS Paint doodle, and I don’t like the idea of including it in the best-of. I think it’d look out of place.