/lit/ - Literature

>>7135575
gross and mean-spirited but maybe not bad writing would need more to really be able to tell

>>7135618
wounds, crawling in my skin

>>7137962
>>7137963
>a writing project where my and my actual fiancee write letters to each other
thats gay
>(Here follows some discussion of private matters and simple poetry, not for analysis by other people)
none of this was worth analysis by other people

>>7138010
it's really cringey as other anon said but also kind of interesting writing about that moment we all have in day to day life, walking past the homeless and needy maybe try and go deeper into that iunno

>>7138126
e d g y

>>7138162
>>7138158
some really nice imagery in here like
>masses green filling so much of the eye
that's fantastic but also there's way too much which is pure telling and no showing like
>she would reply with dull words leading nowhere
this is just statement, could easily have been integrated more creatively