/lit/ - Literature

I kinda hate this.
I accidentally made some alliteration in the first line (this is not the original first line), and then I tried to edit this into a full series of alliterated lines.
I think this is a waste of time, and I'm probably going to just erase it and write it out normally.
If I kept the beast of black bone beset the belligerents would it take you out of the work that it is the only bit of alliteration in the section?