/lit/ - Literature

>>16008052
>Why yes, I do suck at writing

>>16007896
Understandable, it's a brief moment to show character and convey things about the current change in society. It is third-limited, though. That pov tends to read stale because the character is meant to be a stale, stuck up, dull bitch at the start.

I'd post part of another pov's action scene but I don't want to shit the place up with shit. No need to turn this into /crit/.