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A new chapter of the Kill List is out. Chapter 16 marks both the longest chapter in the book so far, as well as the 'ending' to part 1 of the book's plot. Now, I'll take a month or so to edit the first sixteen chapters before moving on to the rest of the book.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54622/the-kill-list/chapter/1271484/chapter-16-to-burn-the-world

Any feedback on the plot, prose, or *anything*, really, would be helpful. Thanks again to those giving the time to provide input, it really is valued.

As this chapter gives the main character quite a lot of development, I would be particularly interested in feedback on it.

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