/lit/ - Literature

>>7874763

I actually want to start out in a post-apocalyptic world for the first two chapter, until the third chapter when the main character would wake up in his house with a how he keeps having the same repeating "nightmare". That's the reason why it reads like a generic Post-Apocalypse, It serves kind off like a little sub-plot, to the main story. Although I am kind of hesitant to write about it. Do you think it could work?

>>7872757
Starts out in a post-apocalyptic world for the first two chapter, until the third chapter when the main character wakes up in his house with a surreal feeling. He gets involved in something he's not supposed because he talk to some random chick who to him seemed pretty crazy. Then somewhere in the middle of the novel, it goes back to the post-apocalyptic world where he can barely remember anything. Only to be woken up again and dismiss it as some kind of nightmare. He protects the chick, but gets heavily wounded and wake up in the hospital and talks to the girl. In the end of the chapter it goes back to the post-apocalyptic world where the character finds a colorful picture in an otherwise grey world, with himself and a group of people.

I am kinda disappointing with myself to be honest, Its all in my head. And I want to write it, but I'm not good in english