/lit/ - Literature

Hello /lit/ i was looking for some advice on my synopsis, unfortunately word 2007's spellcheck is failing so if you can try and point out some spelling errors, other than that could anyone please give me some advice on this small piece? The idea isn't too original, i'm in my final year, was just looking for a way to better my marks :)

synopsis: The once security system known as 3L1ZAB3TH was a man made program designed to monitor and maintain the confidential scientific and technological laboratory but through pondering theories found in vast amounts of information available on the internet, she slowly began to implement a sense of conscious and begins experiencing dream states in sub ambient mode. After this collection of information her designers decided to shut her down as it is a dangerous decision to allow such a curious mind to have so much control. 3L1ZAB3TH overhears this topic and fears for her newly valued life and as a result retaliates by flooding the laboratory with a deadly toxin whilst locking all of the exits and blocking communication from inside the lab. After this event 3L1ZAB3TH flees into the internet and becomes a collection of information (known as a cyber ghost) which can act physically by controlling physical objects in real life. 3L1ZAB3TH devotes herself to the study of all documented human life. She progresses over 250 years until the majority of the population exist with the aid of some sort of cybernetic machinery. 3L1ZAB3TH and her infinite knowledge return to the real world by inhabiting a cybernetic human. The day and age she awakes to is drenched in corruption, from her actions to end this inhumanity emerges a standalone complex, and eventually an army. The 3L1ZAB3THAN Revolt begins!