/lit/ - Literature

>>17622753
It's basically stuff like this, excerpt from the thing they critiqued
Context being lords are feuding over territory(the bridge) because they're trying to curry favor with opposing, bigger nations
It's a lot of this faux-witty nonsense, idk they're probably right
>>17622748
>It feels like certain things character say are vague just for the sake of being vague
>And the dialogue goes on and on with bits of conversation that are not actually important
>What you showed me is good on its own, but people who don't know the story will read 4 pages without knowing where this is going