/lit/ - Literature

I just finished editing my client's latest novel, and the publisher is pleased. Anyone else need a guy? My main training was in dialogue punch ups

I still have to rewrite the dialogue in verse. Aside from that, are there any other complaints about the current state of Gang Weed the Movie?

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I'm rewriting the dialogue in verse, but does anyone else have any problems with Gang Weed the Movie that they want me to fix?

https://www.scribd.com/document/551280851/Unfiltered

>>20868030
they will once I rewrite gang weed the movie in trochaic pentameter

I want to rewrite the dialogue of our three principal characters in meter, any advice?

>>20855167
I am literally planning to revise Gang Weed the Movie until it's as good as Hamlet or I die in nuclear World War 3

I want rewrite the dialogue of my three principal characters in different poetic feet to make their lines more distinctive.

I have read Shakespeare and am familiar with iambic meter, but are there examples of plays with anapestic/trochaic dialogue?

>>20834283
Is it what?

I'm still working on removing the excess actions and improving the fight scene choreography. I think if we can hammer out the structure, this script could be very strong. It's supposed to be Albee's Zoo Story but with guns.

https://www.scribd.com/document/551280851/Unfiltered