/lit/ - Literature

Interesting. You’re obviously reading the right stuff. But there’s something about the delivery that falls into a cliche of itself. I feel people call whatever they don’t understand schizo, but I feel like you run within this free space not so much to speak freely, but to speak free from writing that would be entertaining to read. You can do whatever the fuck you want, and obviously people like it, but listen to me, you are sitting on too much good material not to develop some eloquence or style that doesn’t scream (I KNOW YOU THINK I AM CRAZY BUT I DONT CARE CUZ ITS IMPORTANT TO SAY THESE THINGS). I can tell you’re excited, that’s good, but why not try to reflect the careful consideration in your writing as you have done in your studies? I dunno why but I feel like suggesting to you reading Capote, his short stuff, articles he did for magazines. What you sound like is a caricature of Philip K Dick written by Pynchon. I like what your saying, and I definitely enjoy reading what your saying, but for the love of God can you attempt to manufacture a way of saying it that doesn’t alienate me from enjoying what your saying? Thanks