/lit/ - Literature

>>17946555

>>17946230
The stars part is cheesy to me, but i think the main reason why is cause star imagery always feels like a way for readers to apply individual meaning as reinforcement for the rest of the writing without much effort on the author's part. You could prob change that segment to "...and no one will ever see it smolder," or some such phrase since the themes of loneliness and related emotions were already noted in the first half of the sentence.
>>17946305
I don't know shit about poetry + I don't know Spanish, but the first idea I connected the line and the Bible reference to was literature's social/mutual cooperation and dynamic instead of outright beauty.