/lit/ - Literature

>>8826504
This is by far the best thing I have seen posted in a critique thread. The grammar is stellar, the metaphors are tight without being too in-your-face, and its funny as fuck on top. Somehow you managed to scoop up a glittering handful of that stream that gurgles behind the faces and words of our generation. But not just the human aspect, there's a pinch of that meatless light that whirs untranslated outside our direct experience.

What a wonderful lift it was to run my eyes over that.

The most amazing part is how easily we swallow compliments. Makes you wonder about the black deep contempt behind them.