/lit/ - Literature

>>20422222
How's this paragraph sounding?

"After that great victory, the free peoples raised kingdoms of stone and gold; wonders the likes of which dreams can barely fathom. Years passed inexorably until even the mighty empires of old and the deeds of their heroes became nothing but a distant memory, embers of the great fires that had ushered this blessed age. Nations splintered into nations and the world lost its way for a while. In this time too, however, the holy bloodline pervived, and the humble kingdom of Bargond was born, and with it a new age of peace, with fair rulers and plentiful harvests. But the greed of the demon god is eternal, and so is his patience..."