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This is a draft for some superhero thing.
For reference, Mantis is a villain with a power loosely based off the Mantis shrimp, he can punch so hard and fast that the victim is basically burned alive by the force.
Mr Amazing is a superman type. Our MC is a kid who could pause time by holding his breath.
It's supposed to be satirical, but as far as structuring goes, how does it fare?

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