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>>8598685
"I woke up" is a terrible way to start a story. And your prose seems way too formal considering you're just writing about taking acid with your roommate.

>>8598032
Check your grammar, man.


So guys the first few paragraphs of my last finished novel:
http://pastebin.com/1m3Q6PAE

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