/lit/ - Literature

>>5801915
Hey pal, that was actually me. My last thread didn't really stay afloat so I hadn't started another.

If you post something of yours, I'd be happy to critique it, in the mean time:

http://pastebin.com/8raSw42z
This is a rough section of my work, I haven't gotten around to polishing it yet, but I'd like to know how it stands as is.

It's someone trashy genre fiction so the scene is set in a medieval-esque city

Hey /lit/

Our critique threads get swarmed with posts, but rarely do any of them get a response, and if they do, its usually obnoxious/useless critique.
Not only that, but I'm sure many writers also abandon the thread before they even see their replies.

So, I wish to give a temporary solution to anybody who is lurking tonight.

Post your shit here and in the morning I will go through every post and give it useful critique. Expect me to be brutally honest. I will point out what you're doing wrong and show you what you're doing right.

This is a guarantee you will get useful critique within 24 hours of your post. Once I start giving critique, however, I will not accept new posts.

I am not a poet, I enjoy poetic writing, but not poetry. So please, none of that shit.

I will try to be in-depth, but I am not an editor/publisher, so keep that in mind and think of my critique as an outsider's view to your work.

>inb4 someone posts a fucking 170k word manuscript.