/lit/ - Literature

lol fucking 4chan. everyone a little pharaoh

>>11179647
sigh. no one on this board actually writes everyday like it's their job, do they? fucking pleb cuck faggots.

>>10927891
okay so i expected this to to terrid and it isn't. good job on being detailed and concrete. that being said, change up your sentence structures. imagine your sentences are music, with the punctuation being the beats/changes et cetera. like every single sentence there is this: ONE, TWO, THREE. ONE, TWO, THREE. over and over. don't get me wrong, the details/images/descriptions are great and all. all you gotta do is master every single form of punctuation and then space them out and don't over use them. now, this is obviously part of a bigger piece of work and you may be purposefully setting up that rhythm... but if it isn't a poem it's too much in my opinion. ^__^

>>10805590
herd behavior kek. you're so fucking smart and authentic and only like really truely awesome things. fuck. i'm in awe.