/lit/ - Literature

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>How do I write a good pitch?
Competition. Real or imagined. If you know you're going to be judged, you need to really take everything up a few notches.

>dropout
Boring.
>ambitions of literally me
Boring.
>always desired a romantic relationship
So an incel? That's actually interesting.
>one who got away
Incels don't have ones who got away lol. They all get away. So it's more One Whom He Obsessed Over. Okay, interesting.
>second chance
Lol 'destroyed it before'. This is actually insane and cringe enough that it could be good if you can write even just passably.

Next:
>tragedy disguised as a romance
Ok. I dig it. But that's every single Nicholas Sparks novel. And hey, they work, so you're not wrong here. OCD protagonist? We already have Monk. And probably others. Is there anything interesting about his particular OCD?