/lit/ - Literature

>>6678139
>paragraph

>>2887364

$Chan was refreshing but I'm afraid in lieu of serious work this could be the case (and I might start using parenthesis even more than I do now).

>>1990519
>The inn was crowded and noisy. Men were fighting, hooting at the women attending the bar, and gambling. A man in a black, fur-lined jacket was sitting at the bar

this is the good part

if this is just an exceprt of something you wrote its bad, do not give exposition freely in fantasy it makes for a very boring read

I'm a great fantasy fan

have the character interact, show the inn through his eyes or the eyes of the innkeeper, something, anything, but do not give us his reason just like that