/lit/ - Literature

>>21741547
>No clue how to change the sigil in my a.i. generated art.
>Decide to just incorporate it into the story instead

>>21706343
Want to read my fantasy book too?

Blurb. How is it? Reworked it a bit. Would appreciate getting a few more opinions.

>New technology provided comforts to the vast majority of citizens, but dangers still lurk. Adah Phenric, The Knight of Serenity takes the Knight's pledge: "To protect the world of Tymber from any that may burn it". An oath all Knights of Valora must take, using their gifts to harness "mana" and protect those unable to.

>Adah is recruited to the D-2 team of the Pine Cantonment but a routine monster killing turns sours when the D-2 team disappears, leaving her alone. She undertakes a new investigation trying to find her missing comrades. Her mission brings her to a deeper mystery that concerns the nature of Tymber itself.

>Now facing a mysterious Lich, a merchant of death, and others seeking their own fortunes, she learns of a growing plot that threatens the stability of the world and one that would require her to make a choice: blood or duty?

Blurb. How is it?
>"To protect the world of Tymber from any that may burn it". It was the pledge Adah Phenric took when she became a Knight of Valora and given the codename, Serenity. Born with the ability to harness "mana" she is recruited to the D-2 team of the Pine Cantonment.

>A routine monster killing sours when the D-2 team disappears. Adah undertakes a new investigation trying to find her missing comrades. Her mission brings her to a deeper mystery that concerns the nature of Tymber itself.

>As she uncovers more information, she learns a growing plot that threatens the stability of the world and one that would require her to make a choice: blood or duty?