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How do I not wear out the welcome and impact of hallucinations to the reader so they don't think "oh look another fakeout"
I've got subtle and blatant indicators, the character reacts varying ways to them as do the people around him, stakes are present, intensity and sense afflicted evolves, and they're spaced out in the story with their own arc of progression.

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