/lit/ - Literature

>>21791317
it seems like your character is making his traveling harder than he has to, but that might well be in his character, they're just details which bother my autism a bit
things like wearing a full helm when there's no apparent combat; IRL knights would open or even wear them on their person during marches precisely because they weren't very comfortable and gave an awful field of view, or seemingly wearing chainmail with no cloth beneath it and of course not cleaning his sword which is very puzzling to me, especially since it is dirty enough to make him vomit
this may all be within character or for other reasons for which I am unawares
again my issues are with the mechanical, I actually quite enjoy the style especially in how you describe the feeling of a long march it evokes the proper sensation of it.