/lit/ - Literature

>>8779150
Preposition Ratio: 10.16 % ← Good

Zombie Nouns:

vibration
expression
information
option
location
million
mission
operation
observation
activity

Lexical Diversity: 27.15 %
Content Carrying Words: 59.09 %
Personal Vocab Diversity: 40.74 %

Longest Words [KILL THEM]:

contingencies
disconnecting
sarcastically

Rolling through this thread, city of shit and Alzheimer's disease—through garbage, city of ulcerated word-choices and saliva turned from fantasy girls to glutinous ambition—and pale imitation—through pines of idiocy, whose inhabitants are doddering idiots, the dead in those above-ground Puerto Rican graves, cartons of dumb sadness, former ports of pain, whose population are brutalized brain spaghetti, ground to goo by 'capitalism'. Ha-ha????

>>8773067
>he was a much, much better writer than I.
He is, you mean, & so y r u even typing nonsense directed in that direction. Why can't we all just, like, get along?

Tell you what, I'm working on an homage to Camus's The Stranger with Meursault as a bi break-dancing punk rocker. Will you kwiteek it fow me?

Best book with a romance that one can perhaps use to forget the crushing despair of being alone for ever?

>>7898904
r u some sorta psychic

>>7418889
A tiny throbbing obelisk of intelligence spawned from the balls of yr two græy hemispheres—that black obelisk basilisk thrumming quietly w/the sounds of an orchestra tuning up in the black pit of the unconscious, confident of the incoming applause. 'Thanks, I guess?' you might say & I'd laugh, laff, laughing, laffin. I like you more than a friend.

>>7367019
'were groggy with tiredness and tried ' → 'were groggy and tried'

'hopeless, soaked and miserable men' → 'hopeless, soaked, and miserable men'

'over their cool bodies like a gentle deathly hand and for the longest part of the night they thought they would both die under the tree together.' ← :') ?

>>7290171
Preposition Ratio: 13.08 % ← Good

Zombie Nouns: 'desecration', 'hesitation'

Lexical Diversity: 45.23 %

Content Carrying Words: 57.57 %

Personal Vocab Diversity: 65.58 %

Longest words: 'desecration', 'gracelessly', 'neighboring', 'scrutinized'

Ye actually know how to use a semicolon. The only, ONLY, change might be: 'This continued on for a while.' → 'This continued for a while.'

Why are ye sneaky-Peteing this onto /lit/? Yr sense of style is giant and open and available and drifts, dancing—the only side effect being a direct hit of elevation to my heart.

>>7220227
Anglish

Cormac McCarthy

Ye

>>7219712
I think any person with elastic anesthetic attempts at WHY-ting, ooby-gooby, who drop this flapduddle SHIT in crit threadz and believe that it is possible to talk about it as being good and strictly on autisthetic grounds hopes 4 attn, is willing to try to clog up my mind thinking they are better than other srs posterz—or who'd even begin to talk about 'what I'm working on' or scribbled crayon words as having 'le meaning' yet are various invisible me mes that don't realize dey r speaking thru which is not determined by education—it's determined/divided by, not so secretly, ppl who are willing to track down real psychedelics and learn2write and ppl like ye who fart into the microphone of the internet. :( ← Bloom-faces at u → :C

>>7030340
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhT_gVh_73w

>>6940406
Walk tall, motherfucker, kick ass, suck gum drop nips, write the words of lust, love fucking and never forget yr come is always hot when fresh, long for f seekers, love the war.

Yr post is above critique and I think ye are accurate in yr depiction of yr initial reviewer.

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I'm thinking about switching the ¶s. I hope I evoked accurately. Thoughts?

>>6838514
The point is: Butterfly hurts people. When she loses her temper she goes completely out of control and her huge flapping mouth becomes a portal into the dank halls of her alimentary canal.

It's difficult to see what role she might play in /lit/.

>>6788854
Hey asshole, ever hear All About That Bass?

Probably not. I sense many empty motel rooms in thy future—unless you trade all yr murkan stock ideas off!

I lol and lol running around the house [sockfoot'd] like a child misdiagnosed w/ADHD who just swallowed dem pills like th' balled up panties I just made yr favorite hooker swallow—thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!