/lit/ - Literature

>>7325824
Sounds more like Ellis, to be honest family.

>>7212858
▲ Like first-hand type shit. → First-hand.

▲ Shit was probably abandoned. → Probably abandoned.

▲ Leica M4™ and 35mm Summilux™ ← 2hip4me

▲ 'and definitely white as fuck.' → 'and definitely white.'

▲ 'Maybe he’d pull it off...' → 'And maybe he’d pull it off...'

▲ 'clutching a compact, expensive social dilemma' → 'clutching an expensive, compact social dilemma' ← b/c compact can be a noun put it 2nd 2 avoid double takes

▲ 'the male gaze' ← will eventually sound dated tbh fam smdh :'D *applause hands*

▲ He perished these thoughts and stared straight upwards. → These thoughts perished and he stared straight upwards.

▲ 'wanted – maybe' → 'wanted—maybe'

▲ Goddamn if anyone could tell. ← 2 close 2 th' other goddayum

▲ 'he landed in a dark room, full of stimulatingly grizzled men,' → 'he landed in a dark room full of stimulatingly grizzled men,'

▲ orifice ← rly? Use another word fgt

But what did ye think overall? Just fuck my shit up fam tbh. Idk, not terrible, not GOOD, but the writing is clear and so that's GOOD. Prob all dat matterz in deez threadz anyway. :DDDDDDDDDDD