/lit/ - Literature

>>21979100
I will personally read it if it's under a thousand words and give you my thoughts as well as constructive criticism with zero name-calling or abuse.

>>21811059
While I have some issues with your formatting, I like the idea of your story. It certainly makes me want to kill this person with a large brick, but I think it reads a little awkwardly in some sections, namely the prose. This is, however, a completed piece, which is better than most people here. I'd say just keep writing and try to focus on making your sentences flow better.

For posting a story on RR, is it better to have a novel with one overarching plot posted in chapters or to do a serialization with multiple different arcs that you can keep going for a long time? Kind of like doing either a movie or a tv show I guess.