/lit/ - Literature

>>14315854
She looked like a 14 year old's wet dream if the kid had had a formative experience at Coachella.

She looked like the physical manifestation of a teenage boys lost words, the lump in his throat - nerves impeding the realisation that beuty was cheap and sex momentary.


- had two, both bad. But I'd keep it vague, introduce some dialogue or character exposition and then later fill in the gaps with physical description. Or, you know, jerk myself off over self-serving soliloquey about sweet, delicious pum-pum.