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Anonymous Fri Sep 29 01:03:29 2017 No.10084025 [View]
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>>10082811
The prose flows very nicely. The verbs are very descriptive, and other than polishing it up some, there's not much I can offer without knowing the narrative.

>>10083059
I've never read The Road <spoiler> only the film</spoiler>, but it certainly seems like it could fit.
Sorry I can't offer more without a bit longer piece.

Mine:
https://pastebin.com/pgH3cReJ

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