/lit/ - Literature

>>6203882
I wasn't thinking about Catch-22 when I wrote it but I kind of see what you mean.

>>6204387
I didn't try to marvel anyone with the construction of the sentence, I only was trying to make it sound good and nothing more.
Reading your comment I agree that it should be changed, I'd like to write something that can be read fluently instead of having to stop and being read several times.
Since I'm not a native speaker some sentences probably sound different in my head than in the ones who have it as a first language.

>>6203915
Now this is a comment I don't understand.
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