/lit/ - Literature

"Relatively fewer" i think that would sound better as "few"

>He walked calmly to his desk
He strode to his desk

remove all "suddenly"s

>The door resounded with a light knock;
I don't care for the word resounded being used with light knock

other than that it sounds good, however, every zoomer has heard the nerd-to-boss speech before because of this meme