/lit/ - Literature

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This is such utter shit. I am very frustrated with it. I have discovered so much old writing in my massive behemoth of a novel and when I try to take it apart the entire thing comes crashing down. Abandoning it is not an option. I can't decide if this guy's "lmao ptsd" storyline is even worth exploring or if I should just have him deal with his grief in a normal way instead of getting pissy at his sister. I have enough plot to cover without dealing with all these little sub plots.