/lit/ - Literature

>>15225522
It’s ironic that you come to complained about your board being being ruined by zoomers and newfags when your kin are doing the exact same thing to /lit/. You don’t read, you don’t lurk, you come here thinking it’s a ideology board where you can feel smart about debating things you probably have no idea about, all the while starting shit off topic threads like this one and killing threads that are actually about literature. /fit/ was killed by thotposters and /r9k/ zoomers, and now you guys have almost finished ruining what was the only good place to discuss literature on the Internet. Maybe reflect on yourself before applying casting your scrutinizing views on others

>>13506923

(I just wrote this in another thread please give me pointers on writing the other stuff ive written is lacking of anything worthy of serious consideration yet)

In his heart Sammie the frog knew he was tainted. He is a criminal and he is about to give himself in its the right thing to do as his mom tough him, and why would he disobey her more now?

Following the guilt of his act which had started to consume him moments after it had occurred he had set his mind to give himself in only stopping by his home to put on his pajamas so that the police would not waste clothes on such a deplorable creature as himself. But on his way to the police office doubt had started setting in and freedoms kiss was on his neck as if seducing him not to go, "The wind" he thought "I've always loved the wind on me, best enjoy it now before I rot away" the words echoed in his mind mechanically as his heart was numb with shock.he could not fully grasp the crushing weight of the underlying concept behind this neither could he fully grasp his surroundings, he was in a sort of trance upon the rock he stood on.

And then suppressed thought started burst in his mind like an unholy catharsis.

"No"

he waited tensely for his morality to fight against this thought and when it did not happen he cautiously continued his train of thought like a child would silently move while attempting to take something they shouldn't

"Why should I give up my freedom? For what? Im already a dreg and as soon as society receives this knowledge from the bloody mess ill be treated as such until the coppers pick me up and then ill be pleasantly forgotten like a inconvenience by those housewives and there twin faces" he spat to one side "HA!" he croaked "fat chance" he took of his pajamas and set of far away to find freedom

And that's how Sammie the frog became Sammie the wiseguy.

>>13506923

(I just wrote this in another thread. Please give me pointers on my writing. I didint post stuff Im righting now cos its too incoherent and i plan on rerwriting it)


In his heart sammie the frog knew he was tainted. He is a criminal and he is about to give himself in its the right thing to do as his mom tough him, and why would he disobey her more now?

Following the guilt of his act which had started to consume him moments after it had occurred he had set his mind to give himself in only stopping by his home to put on his pajamas so that the police would not waste clothes on such a deplorable creature as himself. But on his way to the police office doubt had started setting in and freedoms kis was on his neck as if seducing him not to go, "The wind" he thought "ive always loved the wind on me, best enjoy it now before I rot away" the words echoed in his mind mechanically as his heart was numb with shock.he could not fully grasp the crushing weight of the underlying concept behind this neither could he fully grasp his surroundings, he was in a sort of trance upon the rock he stood on.

And then suppresed thought started burst in his mind like an unholy catharsis.

"No"

he waited tensely for his morality to fight against this thought and when it did not happen he cautiously continued his train of thought like a child would silently move while attempting to take something they shouldn't

"Why should I give up my freedom? For what? Im already a dreg and as soon as society receives this knowledge from the bloody mess ill be treated as such until the coppers pick me up and then ill be pleasantly forgotten like a inconvenience by those housewives and there twin faces" he spat to one side "HA!" he croaked "fat chance" he took of his pajamas and set of far away to find freedom

And thats how sammie the frog became sammie the wiseguy

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