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Hey /lit/ Tim here again, this time with chapter two! For those of you that don't know me I've been visiting this board for the last couple of weeks seeking criticism on my new book "Hero, a Tim Banks Chronicle" which will be published in the fall, with sequels in the winter and summer seasons. Chapter one can be read here ( http://pastebin.com/i1AU7VWU ). I will be posting chapter two to hopefully get some feedback from the intellectual conglomerate that is /lit/. So pull up a chair and put on your reading glasses, here goes chapter two!

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Hey guys, Tim here again this time with chapter two! For those of you that don't know me (I'm sure a lot of you do) I'm writing a book titled "Hero, a Tim Banks Chronicle" and I need extra eyes to help with the editing process. You all have been extremely valuable in the process so far and chapter one is finished as far as I can tell and if you care to read it, you can find it here ( http://pastebin.com/i1AU7VWU ). So pull up a chair, strap in and get ready to read folks! I could really use any and all criticism so if you read please, please leave a comment. Thanks!

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Okay /lit/ Tim here again looking for more advice. You guys have been so unbelievably helpful with my writing that I'll be putting /lit/ in the acknowledgements section of the finished book. For those of you that haven't seen this post before, I'm writing a book called "Hero, a Tim Banks Chronicle" and it will be published next fall, with sequels in the proceeding winter and summer seasons. I'll be posting the first chapter looking for any and all advice, even trolls! So gather around and read my friends, I need the help!

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Hey /lit/, some of you probably remember me from a few days ago, but for those of you that don't my name is Tim and I'm in the process of editing my new novel "Hero, A Tim Banks Chronicle". This book will be published in the fall and the sequels will proceed in the winter and summer seasons. I'm in need of some fresh eyes to point out my mistakes and in return hopefully you'll get some enjoyment out of the story. So far /lit/ has been incredibly helpful in helping me with the "show, don't tell" aspects of the book that I was neglecting and I'm eager to hear what you guys have to say next!

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Hey /lit/ I'm putting some final editing into my book "Hero" that will be published next fall. I could really use some advice and some extra pairs of eyes to help the editing process.

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In my experience when one says the word “Super Hero” people get this image of a man in tights or a masked keeper of justice, but could a person be a super hero without necessarily fighting crime? What if someone has a “super power” but doesn’t hit the streets at night and use it to foil all those cliché muggers? When people ask me what I do, I say I’m a super hero.

Hey /lit/!
I'm an aspiring author and I'm looking for some feedback on the first few chapters of my novel "Hero, A Tim Banks Chronicle" It's the second in the trilogy and the first will be available on paperback and ebook courtesy of Random House Publishing next fall. /lit/ has always been a great place to find respite and I really can't wait to hear your criticism!

Here is the summary I will be sending in my query letter.

In my experience when one says the word “Super Hero” people get this image of a man in tights or a masked keeper of justice, but could a person be a super hero without necessarily fighting crime? What if someone has a “super power” but doesn’t hit the streets at night and use it to foil all those cliché muggers? When people ask me what I do, I say I’m a super hero.

Looking for criticism.

In my experience when you say the word “Super Hero” people get this image of a man in tights, or a masked keeper of justice, but could a person be a super hero without necessarily fighting crime? What if someone has a “super power” but doesn’t hit the streets at night and use it to foil all those cliché muggers? When people ask me what I do, I say I’m a super hero.