/lit/ - Literature

>>20690775
I'm here for advice, I can't write like Disco Elysium.
In books I like maximalist writing but I can't do that
What the hell was I thinking writing this? A game like this would get me laughed out of the medium.

I'll reference my entire post, part 1.

I can't write for shit, I am stupidly visual and I can picture everything and if I could draw I'd draw it instead but I can't.

>"To think one would care so much about this, never saw the value"- the man snorted his thoughts aloud- "it's all busywork, it's useless."
>"It's history" - the elderly man replied abruptly - "no need to be brutish about it"
>I was not in the mood for arguing or hearing someone else have at it, abrupt cut to waking life still had me confused. The nature of our expedition, permits still in mind, scheduling, preparation, shipping, hiring and vetting process, eventually came back to my mind. Bureaucracy ocean to get here, months spent waiting for the operation to be looked at after that revised, two couldn't wait to be home again. Mere minutes back into this and I was already pissed off.
>Helicopter blades droning in and out, almost arrhythmical past the cabin. City's a cacophony today, has been for my whole stay.

>Time to cut my silence - "ETA?" - all I want to say, there's this particular headache beating down on me, the sweating was another demon entirely, parboiled in this cabin high above the ground, 5 degrees away from the brazen bull sure enough. Tallest building on this city could barely be seen, dizzying to think about but was never one for the fear of heights, claustrophobia too, never appealed to me in particular.
>"ETA?" - the worker next to me replies automatically, I get that impression from his tone of voice but I might have ignored one or two replies already, I'm yet to feel my brain active again, the altitude or sleep, one of those two has me confused and idiotic. Either that or he doesn't speak my language, there was something funny about his pronunciation, not stilted but didn't strike me as a natural.

""Writer's block""

>>20678079
BETTER THAN ME THATS FOR SURE
YUORE A WAY BETTER WRITER THAN ME, NOW AND FOREVER